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Making a Thesis Specific.

-- 2014-10-10
My TA said that my thesis statement is “somewhat vague and lacks specifics.” How do you make a thesis statement not be vague? Here is my thesis: “Vaccination is a good thing that can protect kids, and celebrities can potentially be hurting a lot of people by opposing helpful vaccines.”
-- 2014-10-10 
Try to avoid an obvious statement in your thesis, for example that vaccinations are good. Rather, figure out what your central claim is here. Are you writing an essay on popular media representations that can be harmful to the view of vaccinations? Is this essay specifically about vaccinations? Ideally, you want to center in on something that is a problem or issue and make a specific claim about what you will argue is or should be the outcome of that discussion. Without a little more information, it is hard to judge this here. Good luck!

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